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@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ The Eclipse AI, Cloud & Edge (AICE) is an Eclipse Working Group, currently in co
 
 ## Activities
 
-The AICE WG and the associated AICE OpenLab does this by:
+The AICE WG and the associated AICE OpenLab achieve this by:
 
 - Fostering open and neutral collaboration amongst members for the adoption of open source technologies.
 - Defining, publishing and promoting reference architectures, blueprints and distributions of open source software that have been verified for industry AI, Cloud, and Edge standards, requirements, and use cases.
@@ -23,18 +23,18 @@ The AICE WG and the associated AICE OpenLab does this by:
 
 ## Participating
 
-### How-to join?
+### How to join?
 
 Are you interested in joining AICE? It's easy, the working group is open to everyone. 
 
-First step to join us is to subscribe to the AICE mailing list that can be found at on the [Eclipse mailing lists page](https://accounts.eclipse.org/mailing-list/aice-wg). Archives can be browsed [here](http://www.eclipse.org/lists/aice-wg).
+First step to join us is to subscribe to the AICE mailing list that can be found on the [Eclipse mailing lists page](https://accounts.eclipse.org/mailing-list/aice-wg). Archives can be browsed [here](http://www.eclipse.org/lists/aice-wg).
 
 If you would like to more actively engage with the initiative, please read more:
 
 - [The Working Group Charter](https://www.eclipse.org/org/workinggroups/aice-charter.php)
 - [The Participation Agreement](https://www.eclipse.org/org/workinggroups/wgpa/aice-working-group-participation-agreement.pdf)
 
-And contact [Florent Zara](mailto:florent.zara-at-eclipse-foundation.org) [Gaël Blondelle](mailto:gael.blondelle-at-eclipse-foundation.org).
+And contact [Florent Zara](mailto:florent.zara-at-eclipse-foundation.org) or [Gaël Blondelle](mailto:gael.blondelle-at-eclipse-foundation.org).
 
 ### Monthly meetings