EDP should conform the trademark usage guidelines.

The word "Eclipse" is used inappropriately in some parts of the document.

e.g.

"A project is the main operational unit at Eclipse. Specifically, all open source software development at Eclipse occurs within the context of a project."

I'm actually not entirely sure how to fix this...

"A project is the main operational unit for open source software development within the Eclipse Community." Or maybe it's enough to say "A project is the main operational unit for open source software development."

Note that I'm also qualifying a context for "operational unit". Should that maybe be "open source software development and delivery"?