From 90f23656f12b33aa4e2a9a59699c7832314af158 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andrei Gherzan <andrei.gherzan@huawei.com>
Date: Fri, 14 Oct 2022 10:53:12 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Andrei fixes

---
 docs/supported-technologies/openthread.rst | 15 +++++++--------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/supported-technologies/openthread.rst b/docs/supported-technologies/openthread.rst
index 459eda7e..96b7a1a3 100644
--- a/docs/supported-technologies/openthread.rst
+++ b/docs/supported-technologies/openthread.rst
@@ -24,15 +24,15 @@ OpenThread support in Oniro
 
 The OpenThread open-source project offers a few key components needed to
 operate in a Thread network. The core protocol implementation can run on
-bare-metal, RTOS or Linux, depending on your use case. In Oniro we support
-running a Thread node on our Zephyr flavour and a full border router on
+bare-metal, RTOS or Linux, depending on your use case. Oniro supports
+running a Thread node on the Zephyr flavour and a full border router on
 the Linux flavour. The following four targets can be build with bitbake and the
 Oniro layers:
 
 * OpenThread Border Router (bitbake ot-br-posix)
   A fully fledged border router configuration where you have at least one Thread
   network interface and an additional one to other networks (e.g. Wi-Fi or
-  Ethernet), and probably an internet uplink.
+  Ethernet), and optionally an internet uplink.
 
 * OpenThread posix service (bitbake ot-daemon)
   For a use case where the device only wants to join a Thread network, but does
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ Oniro layers:
   on.
 
 * Radio Co-Processor firmware (bitbake zephyr-openthread-rcp)
-  For the border router configuration a radio interface is needed to communicate
+  For the border router configuration, a radio interface is needed to communicate
   with the Thread network. The hardware could be the usual Arduino Nano 33 BLE or
   a USB dongle with the same SoC as the Arduino Nano 33 BLE. To work with the
   OpenThread Border router on the Linux side this special firmware neededs to be
@@ -50,12 +50,11 @@ Oniro layers:
 * OpenThread node on Zephyr (bitbake zephyr-blueprint-gateway-node)
   The node target is only available if the build includes the Oniro blueprint
   layer. This example application configures various details needed to run
-  OpenThread on Zephyr. It can be used as a base for your own application
-  development.
+  OpenThread on Zephyr. It can be used as the base for developing an application.
 
 None of the components is part of the default images provided by Oniro. To add
-them to your custom image, you would need to add it to the image recipe, or append
-it in your `local.conf` to every image you build e.g.:
+them to your custom image, you would need to define a custom image recipe, or append
+to `local.conf` something similar to:
 
 .. code-block:: console
 
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